C2Sentence structure

Figure retoriche

Using rhetorical figures on purpose

Said plainly, a message informs; given rhythm, repetition and contrast, it persuades.

Plain or rhetorical

Rhetorical figures change not the content but its effect. They belong in speeches, opinion pieces, advertising and closing paragraphs. English speechwriters use the same figures, so what matters here is the Italian shape of each one.

The same demand

Plain

Dobbiamo investire nella scuola, perché è importante per il futuro del paese.

We need to invest in schools because they matter for the country's future.

Rhetorical

Investire nella scuola non è una spesa, è una scelta. Una scelta per i nostri figli, per le nostre città, per il nostro futuro.

Investing in schools is not an expense, it is a choice. A choice for our children, for our cities, for our future.

Antithesis, then anaphora in three steps.

Four figures

Tricolon: three parts

Three parallel parts feel complete. The series is strongest when the last part is the longest or weightiest. Dropping the e makes it terser and harder.

Abbiamo ascoltato, abbiamo capito, abbiamo deciso.

We listened, we understood, we decided.

Un servizio veloce, semplice e alla portata di tutti.

A service that is fast, simple and affordable for everyone.

Anafora: same opening

The same word or phrase opens several clauses in a row. This sets a beat and holds a list together.

Chi lavora di notte, chi cresce i figli da solo, chi assiste un genitore anziano: è a loro che pensiamo.

Those who work nights, those who raise children alone, those who care for an elderly parent: they are who we have in mind.

Antitesi: contrast

Two opposites sit in parallel halves. The patterns non X, ma Y and the terser non è X, è Y are the most common.

Non chiediamo privilegi, chiediamo diritti.

We are not asking for privileges, we are asking for rights.

Pochi hanno molto, molti hanno poco.

The few have much, the many have little.

Contrast with crossed word order.

Domanda retorica

The question expects no answer; it implies one. In such questions forse usually implies "no", while non … forse implies "yes".

Chi di noi non ha mai sbagliato?

Which of us has never made a mistake?

Meaning: nobody.

È forse colpa dei ragazzi se gli autobus non passano?

Is it really the kids' fault that the buses don't run?

Meaning: no.

Non è forse vero che tutti ne abbiamo approfittato?

Isn't it true that we have all benefited from it?

Meaning: yes.

Targeted, not everywhere

A figure works where the text peaks: the opening of a speech, the end of an opinion piece, the central demand. In a report, minutes or a technical text, figures stand out as editorialising.

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